Jonathan, (01)
Thanks for catching these errors. I'm embarrassed to say that I
completely missed them while proofing the letter. I guess this is a
good illustration of "collective intelligence"! I've forwarded your
corrections to John Toole and asked him to incorporate them in the
final version. (02)
At 11:09 PM 2/10/2006, Jonathan Cheyer wrote:
>Hi Phil,
>
>I looked through the draft letter, and it looks good. Thanks for
>writing it up. That should make it easy for John to get this sent off quickly.
>
>Here's a few minor edits that you should probably fix and resend to
>John before he sends the letter out:
>
> * In the address, there is a "." missing:
>Pp C5.A
>
> * 1st paragraph, typo: compliments -> complements
>
> * typo: Tymenet -> Tymnet, paragraphs: 3rd, 4th, 6th
>
> * typo: Tymeshare -> Tymshare, paragraphs: 3rd, 4th, 6th
>
> * typo: Bernard: Pueto -> Peuto
>
> * More detailed info (if you need it) about dates and names are at:
>http://chm.cim3.net/cgi-bin/wiki.pl?NlsLegal/Copyrights
>
>
>Jonathan
>
>
>
>Philip Gust wrote:
>>John,
>>Attached is a draft letter to BT asking them to provide us a letter
>>documenting their past ownership of NLS/Augment, and releasing us
>>to make use of it in a not-for-profit capacity.
>
>
>Philip Gust
>Nouveau Systems, Inc.
>
>phone: +1 650 961-7992
>fax: +1 520 843-7217
>
>
>mailto: gust@NouveauSystems.com (03)
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